First time home buyers looking to buy a home have trouble finding modern, affordable and sustainable custom built property.
Original Purpose:
The purpose of this research was to raise awareness amongst first time home buyers about the benefits of investing in modern prefabricated homes.------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Refined Problem:
People in the Bay Area who are looking into buying a home are unaware of the existence and benefits of modern prefabricated homes.
Refined Purpose:
The purpose of this research was to inform and raise awareness amongst potential Bay Area homeowners about the benefits of modern prefabricated homes.
Although I feel a lot better about the refined statements, they may need to be reworked yet again to narrow the focus. argh.
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